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This is a story about a girl who trys to discover who she really is and the guy who helps her along the way.
This is Andrea Johnson’s story (well hers and all her friends’ story).
And I lan to tell it to you as well as i can. So sit back and relax and just enjoy.
I belive it starts a little bit like this............

"Yo,Aj why don't we go play ball at the park?"leo said as he threw the ball in the air.
"It's to hot."Aj (Andrea's nickname is Aj)said.
" There has to be something to do ."Ethan whinned "why don't we go to the lake for a swim"
Jc said in a unenthusasitic voice"NO"Aj practicly shouted.
"Why not?"leo asked "uh um the uh water's to mirkey"Aj said in a unconvincing voice.
"No it's not the waters prefect."Jc insisted "FINE YOU GO IM STAYING HERE!!!!!!"Aj yelled as she stomped to the other side of the room.
"What's your problem ?"leo asked shakily "nothing i just don't want to go swiming today."AJ with a whinne.
"Fine it was just a suggestion."Jc moaned"well, we could um go to my house and play video games."
Ethan said in a unconfident mumble."Yeah thats a great idea."Aj shouted
"Come on you guys race ya."leo said as he ran out of Jc's garge.


Aj had been freinds with jc(jake carlton)Ethan thomas(Ethans nick name is Et you know like the movie Aj loves to tease him about it.),and leonardo keltin
since she was 4 thats a pretty big deal considering the fact that she's 16 now. That's 12 years and they know everthing about each other
or so they thought............


"Hey'jake hurry up you'll be late for school!"Jc's mom shouted"good then i wont have to go."Jc whinned in respone.
You see Jc was starting a whole new school THE ALLEN CHRISTOPHER PREP ACADEMY and he hated it .
"Why couldn't i stay at my old school with Et and Leo?"he asked with a rude tone.
"Because this is a much beter school and because i said so got it mister." Jc's mom said "know get dressed or you be late and hurry."
"FINE !" Jc shouted as he ran up the stairs.

"Hey you guys whatsup?"Andrea shouted as she walked over to her freinds katherin (kitty)and maria warnick.
"Hey girl how've you been?"kitty ask Andrea with a excited look on her face "fine but i missed you guys so much ."
"Yeah we missed you to."maria said as she hugged Andrea tightly.While andrea was to busy chatting up a storm with her girlfreinds(girls who are freinds)
Jc had just got to the school and was try to find his locker which coincidentaly was right next to Andrea's.
Jc finaly found his locker and there was some cute girl in a short light blue skirt and a matching polo shirt leaning on it "Hey could you move your blocking my locker"
Jc said in a extermly rude voice.Andrea to angry to reconize Jc's voice snaped around and said "hello whats you problem i would have moved if you would have said it nicely and not with so much attuide!!!!!!!!!!!"thats when Jc relized who the cute girl in blue was "Aj"he said in a confused voice .He couldn't belive it but it was her (he would reconize that yell from any where)just in a girlie outfit light blue eye shadow and clear lip gloss."Jc what are you doing here?"Andrea couldn't belive her eye's Jc would never trust her again she could feel her world falling to peices she felt like she was about to cry."I should ask you the same thing and what are you whereing Aj whats going on here?"Jc asked " I,i um i go here ."she said in a dasie "why haven't you told us?"Jc said "I was "she didn't want to finsh her sentce but Jc wouldn't let it go " you where what ?""I was afrid of how you would reack."
she said "what do you mean how i would reacked.""i mean i was afriad you would start freaking out and yelling like you are now."she said in a offended way."I hate to interupt
but Andrea if we don't go to class soon we'll all be late." Kitty said in a rush "you right .Jc i'll explain everything on the way oh, by the way this is kitty and her sister maria"
Andrea said"It's a pleasure im sure"Jc said in a smooth tone "Oh your Jc wow Andrea your right he is cute."
maria said in a very hello kitty voice "MARIA"Andrea shouted as her face turned red."You uh think i'm cute."Jc said in a sacatice voice "I said that onces and i didn't mean it"
Andrea said still getting redder "no you say it everytime we talk about your guy freinds and you always mean it."maria chimmed in "MARIA WOULD YOU PLEASE SHUTUP!!!!!" Andrea shouted.Jc couldn't help but laugh maria was clueless to why Andrea was so angry and kitty just wanted to go to class. "We'll take you to class ok and i'll explan at lunch got it "Andrea said slowly so Jc understood "Fine okay lets just go so we won't be late."Jc said in respones .
then they all ran down the almost empty hallway to mr.warnick a room.






"I can't believe you've been going to this prep academy for 3 years and never told any of us!"
Jc said for the 8th time it the last ten minuets. "I said i was sorry would you please leave it alone already!"Andrea said in a annoyed voice "Fine then."Jc was quite for a total of 5 minuets and then "you still haven't told me about the whole' you thinking i'm cute thing'.""And i don't plan to becase theres nothing to tell you about it's not true OK!"Andrea said in her still annoyed voice "Yeah it is he....."maria tryed to say as Andrea slaped her hand over her mouth. "Maria would you please keep your mouth shut."Kitty said in a frusterted voice "Come on you guys let her finish if it's not true."Jc with a michviouse grin across his face " one take that dumb behind grin off your face two it's not true and three maria has a problem with talking when she should just shut up."Andrea said (her hand still over maria's mouth)."Fine new subject.I can't wait to tell the guys about your split presonality."Jc said with a chuckle "No!!!!! you can't tell the guys if they new ohh."Andrea said in whimmper."Why?"Jc asked "WHY?WHY?BECAUSE YOU GUYS ARE COMEPLETE DRAMA QUEENS!!!!!!! Andrea shouted"NO WE'RE NOT!!"Jc shouted back "yes you are you always over reacked."Andrea said in her know-it-all voice.
"Name one time."Jc demanded "ok uh remeber that time when i was nine and my dad made me were that dress out to eat ?"Andrea asked and then Jc said "yeah the tiny pink one that made you look really pretty.""Yeah and when you guys saw me ET and Leo threw mudd at me and you ran off and none of you spoke to me for a week." Andrea said .
"Fine maybe sometimes we overreacked just alittle bit."Jc replied "well i've got to go bye kitty and maria see you later AJ."Jc shouted as he turned to leave "hey wait what did you say about me being pretty!"Andrea shouted just know realizing what he had said but it was to late he had already darted out the door.

When Andrea meet up with the guys after school Jc and her were real quite."Hey why are you two so quite?"ET asked"Bad day"they both said at the same exact time."ok that was a little bit freaky"leo said then started humming the song from the twilight zone."yeah whatever well i've got to go lots of homework to do bye."Aj said as she left.
Later,Andrea called Jc and :
"Hey,Jc it's me Andrea"
"Oh,hey whats up?"
"I just wanted to let you know to stay away from Josh Armstronghe's captin of the football team."
"Ok why?"
"because he seems to think that you have a thing for me."
"WHAT!!!!!i do not!"
"I know but he thinks different."
"what would it matter to him any way?"
"well he has only try to get me to go out with him for as long as i've been going to that school."
"3 years he's been try to get you to go out with him for 3 years he must really like you."
"No he just wants to be the first guy to go out with me. it's just so he can be more popular."
"Thats really vain your a great preson and you look great to."
"What did you just say that i look great?"
"No! heck no!"
"I must be hearing things.well,just stay away from the jocks."
"Alright fine,well bye."
"Oh,wait"
"what?"
"I just remeberd stay away from shelly penington she
's head of the cheerlaeding squad."
"Why?"
"because she thinks i have a thing for you and..."
"Do you?"
"No!would you let me finish!"
"Fine."
" and so she'll do anything to get you to go out with her."
"so?"
"so,she's a selfabsord spoiled little brat who thinks i'm a insect in need of sqashing."
"So?"
"So if you do go out with her i will never speak to you agin."
"Ok,fine."
"Alright, then i'll see you at school.bye"
"Alright seeya."
(click)




The next day at school:

"Hey,Jc what's up?"Maria said in her very bubbley voice."Nothing much,were's Andrea?"Jc asked.
"She's not here yet."kitty answered."Oh,ok.so which class do we have first?"he asked completly clueless.
"Mr.toilly."A voice said from behind him.He spun around and saw Andrea walking up in a light blue skirt with a light pink belt that match her pink falloutboy polo style shirt.
she also had makeup on light blue eye shadow clear lip gloss that made her lips look very shiny.She had her dirty blonde hair down in a girly fashion which he oddly though made her dark brown eyes look radint."Heeellllllloooooo earth to jake?"Andrea's voice finaly reaching Jc's brain."Oh' hi,um"Jc said still slitly in a trance."Wait did you just call me jake."
he asked suprised "Yeah it's your name right?"Andrea said "yeah but in the 12 years i've nown you.you have never called me jake"Jc said shocked that it sounded so strange.
"Really it;s been 12years? Wow "andrea replied "yeah."Jc said " Andrea told me that she really thought that you had a cute name."Maria said trying to light up the mood."MMMMAAAAAARRRRRRIIIIIIIIIAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"Andrea screamed her face now a scary shade of red."well if it isn't my good freind Andrea,who's you cute freind?"shelly penningtons highpitched girlie cheerlearder voice that drove andrea nuts"none of you busisenus shelly and don't call me your freind cause i hate you and you hate me so don't lie to your self."andrea said in a highpiched tone to make shelly angry "jake carlton"Jc said in polite manner "well jake i'm .......""Shelly pennington, andrea told me alittle bit about you."jake cut in."Nothing good of corse."Andrea chimmed in "ha,well see ya jake."shelly said as she walked off .
"I think she's kind of cute"Jc said "And i think i shoud stop speaking to you now."Andrea said with a whip of her hair "just kidding geez."Jc said in his defense.""come on lets just go to class"kitty moaned.


Note from maria to jc:

MARIA:HEY JC
JC:hey what do you need?
MARIA:i just want to ask you a quetion
JC:what?
MARIA:do you like andrea?
JC:yeah she's one of my best freinds.
MARIA:no i mean do you like her like her?
JC:you mean like her like a girlfreind like her?
MARIA:yeah so do you?
JC: talk later mrtodley is coming.


Note from maria to andrea:


MARIA:hello
AJ:what do you want maria?
MARIA:nothing.just wanted to tell you something.
AJ: what?
MARIA: i asked JC if he like liked you.
AJ:Why on earth did you do that?that so wrong he's one of my best freinds ever.How could you do that?
Maria:I was curious.
AJ:SO, that still doesn't give you the right to ask him that!
Maria:so i guess you don't want to know what he said then?
AJ:what did he say?
Maria:so you do want to know.
AJ:maria just tell me.
Maria:he didn't tell me.
AJ:maria sometimes i just want to slap you.
Maria: thats mean.
AJ:talk at lunch.


later that day at lunch:

"Hey you guys whats up."andrea asked
"nothing much."maria answered
"i'm so bored."kitty moaned
"me too."jc said with a sigh.
"ohohohoh i know what we can talk about."maria shouted
"maria spit it out."kitty growled
"jc you never answered my question earlyer."maria said slikly
"yeah that's right so fess up."andrea said as jc face got red
"what question?"kitty asked.
"maria asked jc if he liked me liked me."andrea said
"oh,so do you?"kitty asked faceing jc.
"oh,no i'm not answering that question."jc said his face still bright red.
"why not?"andrea asked .
"because if i say yes you'll get mad and if i say no you'll get mad so it's a lose lose situation."jc nearly shouted
"you've got a point there."andrea said.
"well i guess we're all beter off not knowing"kitty said
"hey i've got an idea jc if andrea answers the quetion than will you?"maria asked
"MARIA!!!!!WE ARE NOT ANSWERING ANY MORE QUETIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"andrea yelled.
"fine."maria said in fear.
"maria we really need to get you a hobby."kitty added
"This is my hobby."maria whinned
"i don't think andrea and jc like being your hobby." kitty insisted.
"Any way lets just talk about something else."andrea said
"oh,hey andrea who are yougoing to the dance with?"maria asked
"what dance?"JC asked
"The spring formal."andrea said in a unpleased voice.
"Which is like the most important dance all year." shelly said as she slithered next to JC.
"why don't you go crawl under a rock you slim little....."andrea tryed to say when kitty and maria both put there hands over her mouth.
"so do you have a date yet huh jake?"shelly said in a very cheerleader voice.
"no"jake answerd.
"really well then how about....."before shelly could finish andrea flung a spoon full of mashpotatoes right on to shellys face.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHATS WRONG WITH YOU AH!!!!!!"shelly screamed
as she ran out the door and in to the bathroom.
"hahahahaha good one Andrea.” kitty laughed
"what did you do that for she just about to ask jc to go to the dance with her?"maria whined
"what she was?"jc asked
"Duh,why do you think Andrea stopped her.” kitty replied
"oh,so she was jealous?” Maria said in her nacy drew voice
"NNOOOO I WAS NOT JEALOUS I JUST HATE SHELLY.” Andrea yelled and stomped off
"i don't think she was jealous she doesn't like me that way." jc said with a bit of sadness in his voice
"Do you?"maria asked mischiveousely
"Do i what?"Jc asked cluelessly."Do you like her that way?""like her what way?"
"Like a girlfriend you dork!" kitty said in a frusterated voice."no,no of course not!!" Jc said in a panic."so why are you blusging?"maira asked sarcasticly.
"I,uh um uh.""you what?".Both girls were looking him straight in the eyes and he could feel them looking straight threw him it was to much for him so"yes,ok yes i do ok!".
"I knew it i knew you had a crush on her."maria said as if she ha d solved some big mystery."Duh,everyone new well, everyone except andrea that is."Kitty added.
"you two can't tell anyone especially not andrea got it."jc screamed "you have to tell her eventually."kitty said with a look of concern."no i don't aj never has to find out.if she does it could destroy our freindship."Jc said with a look in his eyes that mad maria feel so ssad so she changed the subject"well,have you seen the knew action film.what was the name?".
"no not yet why?"jc said not seeing how that was relaitive"because me,andrea,and kitty are all watch it at my house tomorrow do you want to come?"maria asked in her most innocent voice."yeah sure.""ok well here s our address come by about six,kay."maria said handing jc a peice of paper. jc took the paper “Sure I’ll be there.”

The next day at the warnick house:

“Hey whens he going to get her?”maria whinned“Soon stop whinning its so
annoying.”kitty barked.“This was supposte to be a movie day not a pool day.”andrea whinned as well.“lease both of you stop whinning get you bathing suits on and get in the pool.”kitty snaped. “I can’t if he see me in my suit he’ll laugh his but off.”andrea moaned “Why don’t you just where your trunks and t-shrit.”maria asked sitting upside down in her beach chair. “Because my dad threw out my trunks and my brother took my t-shirt and neither of them will get me new ones that’s why.”andrea answered as the door bell rang. “Oh,no he’s here!”andrea said running to the closet “No,your not going to hide your going to go change with maria why I get the door.”kitty said grabbing andrea and maria and point them towards the stairs.“Fine.”the said together running up the stairs.
Kitty walked over to the door opening it to see a very tired and over exlarted jake.
“Did you ride your bike all the way here?” kitty asked when she saw the bike in the drive way. “It’s no big deal I only live 20 blocks from here.” Jake said still trying to catch his breath. “Come on in.” she said opening the door the rest of the way.
“Where are Maria and Aj?” he asked looking around the house “and why are you wearing a bathing suit?” “Oh our DVD player broke and now were going to swim in the pool instead.” kitty answered look up the stairs for Andrea and Maria. “I didn’t bring my trunks?”. “No big you can borrow my brothers trunks.” kitty said pointing towards her older brothers room. “Okay.” Jake said walking towards the room.
“Where’s Jake?” Andrea yelled from up the stairs. “He’s in the other room changing into my brothers trunks.” “What!!!why didn’t you tell me your brother had trunks I could have worn that instead of this.” “Would you stop complaining and get down here I want to get in the pool it’s freaking hot.” Kitty barked so loud that she made a picture fall off the wall. “What was that nosie?”maria asked poking her head out of the room “Nothing just kitty bellowing a gasket.” Andrea answered
“You two get down here NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”
Kitty shouted “fine we’re coming we’re coming.” Maria said as she and Andrea rushed down the stairs. “Wow” Jake said coming out of the room just as Andrea got too the bottom of the stairs “what are you wearing?” Jake asked looking at Andrea not believing his eyes. Andrea his best friend who he was just now learning like to where skirts and boy band t-shirt’s was wearing a purple bikini.
“It’s a bathing suit what does it look like?” Andrea snapped “would you too stop jiaber jawing and get in the pool”kitty shouted she and maria had already got in the pool .“Coming!” they both said at the same time running to the pool.

A couple of hours later:
After several water fights and a swimming contest (kitty won of course).
“Well, it’s almost six o’clock we better get going” Andrea said after looking at the clock on the wall in the warnick kitchen. “she’s right I’m suppose to be home by 7:30.”jake added “Hey my dad can give you a ride home then.” no thanks i’ll just ride my bike back.” Jake said walking to the room he left his clothes in. “Oh, come your not still scared of my daddy are you?” Andrea said with a I can’t believe you voice “Not, just your dad your brother to there huge and strong and very protective of you.” Jake said spinning around to face Andrea “You are such a baby.” Andrea
said trying to keep from laughing “I am not you dad told me that if I ever touched you or broke you heart he’d hunt me down and mount my hide on his wall!” Jake said shaking as he said it “Oh,big deal he was just kidding you never could take a joke.” “I was four and he made it very clear that he wasn’t kidding.” “well,ok maybe my dad’s a little over protective but trust me he won’t hurt you I pinky promise.”
Andrea said sticking out her pinky “Okay but if he does I’m so haunting you from the grave” Jake said locking his pinky with Andrea’s “Deal.” Andrea said letting go of his pinky and running up the stairs to change.

DING,DONG “Andrea your dad and you brother are here.” kitty yelled up the stairs where Andrea ,Maria and Jake where watching TV. “Coming.” Andrea shouted back down to kitty. “Come on Jake.” “Okay.” Jake said shaking as he heard Andrea’s dad yell up the stairs for her to hurry.
“Hey daddy do think that we could give Jake a ride home please?” Andrea asked hugging her dad “What you didn’t tell me that there was going to be any boys here!” her dad said looking Jake up and down. “Dad it’s just Jake nothing happened trust me.” Andrea said hugging her brother how was also looking Jake up and down with the same scary look in his eye. “It’s not you i don’t trust it’s him.” Her dad said not looking away from Jake for a second. “Really, sir nothing happened I would never try anything with Andrea we’re just friends” Jake replied in a shaky voice. “Wait when did you start call her Andrea I thought she was Aj to you.”Tj(Tomas Johnson Andrea’s brother)asked looking from Andrea to Jake. “Daddy come on he lives right next door!” Andrea whined “Fine but he sit’s in the back with your brother.” her dad finally answered “Ok bye kitty bye Maria.” Andrea said running out the door. “Yeah,bye.”jake said slowly moving towards the door “Boy, if your riding with us you better move a little faster.” Andrea’s dad yelled from the car “yes coming sir.” Jake yelled running to the car.

At home (Finally)
“That wasn’t so bad now was it.” Andrea said opening the car door for Jake. “No, but i don’t plan on doing it agin.”he said struggling to get out of the car. “Here let me help.”andrea insisted grabbing his hand and helping him out.Jake had finally got out of the car and was standing in front of andrea when they heard some yell “why are you to holding hands?” they both turned to see Et and Leo running up to them.
When they finally reached Andrea and Jake Leo asked them “So, you to going to kiss or something?. “What?” they both asked complete they clueless. Then ET pointed down at there hands. They both looked down Andrea and Jake still had a hold of each others hands. “Oh!” They said let go and stepping back from each other. “You to are such weirdo’s” Andrea said punching Leo on the arm. “oww!!!” Leo whined “hahahahaha!” ET started “Think that’s funny?” Andrea said then punched ETin the arm to. “oww!”. “Anyway where have you to been we haven’t seen any of you all week?” Leo asked. “You know just here and there.” Andrea said “It’s dinner time girl get in here.” Andrea’s dad yelled from there pouch (Him and her brother had already gone inside.)”Ok coming.” Andrea yelled “well I’d better be getting in bye guys.” Andrea said than ran towards the house “bye Aj” Leo and ET yelled after her “bye, Andrea!” Jake yelled after. Andrea stopped half way to the door “did you just call her Andrea?” ET and Leo asked looking from Jake to Andrea and back. “I uh um I have to uh go.” Jake stuttered and then ran to his house(Andrea ran in to her’s after she hered jakes answers)”what was that about?”ET asked srathing his head looking at his friends houses “You got me?” Leo answered with the same dimwitted look on his face.